Steve:

My comments regarding abstract #916 ("Massively Parallel Computing
Enables Adaptive Predictions of the Sun's Storm Path"), submitted 
for SC98:
 
In general, this abstract is poorly written. There are many spelling
errors, and many sentences are incomplete or unclear. The name, a
brief description, and purpose of the model needs to be stated clearly
at the beginning. Each figure should be numbered and have a caption.
The curves in the code scaling figure should be labeled to make clear
the references in the text. I am returning the paper to you by black 
bag with some comments written in the margins.

If this were being submitted for publication, I would have to reject it
in its current form. However, the project itself is certainly relevant 
to SC98, and deserves to be presented at the conference. Maybe the 
complete paper, written for publication in the conference proceedings,
will be more carefully written. Therefore, I'm returning it with the
recommendation to "conditionally accept".

--Ben

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